It really feels amazing when you finish your college. The same heavy brain, saturated with engineering knowledge (transformers stepping up and down the voltage, motors running on load and no-load, short medium and long transmission lines, faults, circuits and diodes everywhere and blah blah blah), is now free and will be roaming around the world for the next 45 days after which my skills will be used by some big firm you see.
Its a new life altogether and though I go nostalgic thinking about the best time of my life, I have to begin a new chapter each day. Here is something new from my side once again. I know I am new to this poetry writing thing, but I am trying hard to write and think in every direction possible. So here I go:
Dove Of Love
Taking myself apart,
Has brought the change,
And on becoming smart,
I found myself strange.
I was not like that,
But you made me so,
Taking all I ever had,
You fuckin tried to go.
Whatever you did was in reality,
The acts of showing our odd parity.
All the shit you brought,
Now makes me think of droughts.
And you fucking know the consequences,
Of all that you did,
I was hurt and still not in my senses,
But for you its a bid.
I hate and repel such hypocrites,
That encircles me and tells me,"I am the best."
Which really is the worst.
But what the Fuck!
It's just hard luck.
Getting such blows is a daily game,
And I know you always get a lot of fame.
So what is that you want from me now?
My wings have been clipped,
But still I am in peace,
With the same color.
I fly in every direction,
Still giving everyone the same affection.
I have nothing left but Love,
Coz I am God's Dove,
The Dove of Love..!!
P.S. I have changed the blog template after a long time and I think she'll like it. What about you people?
Please do tell me about the template. Suggestions are invited from everyone. And I have submitted my Delhi Belly Series to a newspaper. It might get published in some days. A blog party if it gets published for sure..
Nuts...:)
44 comments:
oh yeah..!! I want a party... hope it gets published...
I simply love the poem... how do u make it rhyme without sounding deliberate... I am so unable to do so... :( but i love yours...
and glad to hear that u r back... now i know people havent forgotten my blog... and will visit soon
@ Chanz
Yeah!! Party is fix once it gets published.
I haven't forgotten your blog Chanz.
Its just that whichever blog used to be att he top of the blog roll I read and ran away quickly.
I will read and comment on all the posts..
and thanks for the praise.
That rhyme comes naturally..
hey... dts a wondrful poem wid lots of beeps in ma mind ven i ws reading... ;)
m sure it ll get publishd.. i dnt want a blog party.. i want a real party(8 shipra mall)..
waiting....
The poem was intense. Except for the beep-beeps :-P
And whats with the pink-pink blog template? :-D
:-D Dont worry, she wont just smile. She will laugh out :-D
Heights to impress huh :-) All the best :-)
@ Ankita
Thanks a lot yaar. But the thing is that those beeps just came in naturally. I know you are already in a state in which you say this beep beep quite a lot of times but then...:)
Party to milegi beta..
@ Insignia
Thank you..
But what should I do then?
I just don't understand.
:(
If shakespeare read this poem, he would die again (this time of heart attack).. a poem full of swear words :D
haha.. but makes a great read ;-)
The journey of "life" . Very well said !!!
Congratulations on finishing college! You are a MAN of the world now :)
Love the poem and the template (she will definitely like it!!!)
As for the Delhi Belly series... keeping my fingers crossed!
Great to c u back !! Looking forward to see the published series !! Poem oh its so different ..
if this is the first poem written by you, its worth...keep it up.
nice 2 c u back!
n yeah, vl w8 4 d party ;)
sweet poem!!
nice template too!!
girls like pink!! :D
btry...such a heart touching poem..gtng more n more experienced..
wow grt poem...i love the DOve...the bird is so flawless and u delivered a flawless poem too...
cngrts on finishing ur clg...hope ur skills get noticed and paid too...
ur blog temp is too nice...bright yet sober...
now the qtn part...who is this 'She'? and dnt wry she will like it...all the best...Enjoy ur 45 days...:-)
and hey forgot...al the best for the Delly Belly publishing...party time will come man....
Hey the template is cute.... who is this "she" hmmm...???
anyways...do tell us if ur series is published..!!! :) njoy..TC :) :)
ur blogger template n title of new post go hand in hand......beauty in simplicity....loved d first stanza......"And on becoming smart,
I found myself strange".....keep d flow of ur expressions via poetry....u r good at it..... :)
lolz its a beep beep poem..but straightfrom your heart one can see the honest overflow of emotions..congrats and all the best for a successful life ahead!
The blog template is great Im sure shed like it!
She will OBVIOUSLY love it re...how cant she.Pink is a perfect way into a womans heart..:) ask me about it.
as far as the poem i concerned,i can tell only one word...
WHOA!
The ebst thing is you changes that Pink template....I was about to call you seeing that template :)
Awesome write again...This is the new thing and you should explore it more :)
@ Shivani
Thank God Shakespeare is dead long ago..:)
U r here after a very long time.
Gud to c u bak..
Keep visiting..:)
@ Karan
Thanks a lot..:)
@ Tangerine
Man of the world.
Sounds very new to me..:)
But then this time is ryt..
Thanks for liking the poem and template.
May it gets published soon..:)
@ Tara
Thank u so much..:)
It feels so nice to c the old readers commenting..:)
BTW
Hw r u?
@ Yogita
Though it is not the first one by me but I am trying to learn the art..
Thanks a lot Yogita..:)
Keep visiting..
@ sakhii
Thank u so much..
Girls really do like pink..:)
@ Vinita
U got time to read my blog. Mera to jeevan safal ho gaya..:P
Thank u so much Dabbi...:)
@ Rohini
Thank u very much..:)
Yeah! I finished my college and will be joining my job soon.:)
Thank u so much for liking the template.
U will surely cum to knw about her. She's der in every blog if u notice..:)
Do pray for the series..:)
Thank u so much,,,
@ Urvashi
Thank u so much..:)
She's my life..
Will surely put up a post if it gets published.
@ Beyond Horizon
Thank u so much for noting such minute things.
Will surely keep the flow moving..:)
Kepp visiting..:)
@ A new Beginning..
Thank u very much Shas.:)
U always bring smile on my face.
I know I shud not have used those swear words but then the flow u c is natural...:)
She has already given her like approval..:)
@ Madhu
Hehe!!
Pink is the perfect to a woman's heart..:)
Whats dere in pink that attracts women?
Thank u so much..:)
:):)
@ Pratik Bhaiya
I will change it in sometime..:)
Why did you stopped?
U sud have called up..:)
Thank u so much bhaiya!!
Seekha to aap se hi h..:)
Aapka Shishya..
Nuts
I have been back on blogs after a long hiatus too so may have not noticed you missing.. Congratulations on writing poetry (new age with slangs LOL ... it is nice to read) and becoming an engineer...
The first thing that I observed when I came here was your template and I think I like this better than the previous one. May be it is time I changed my template too ;)
hiii....it was nice readin ur dove of love.....congrats on finishing d collg....all d best for ur new lif..tak cr!
@ Farila Mam
Its so nice to c u here after a long time.
I was so missing ur comments..:(
I have found this side of mine recently...:)
Slangs came in naturally..
Dont knw why. I dont use them regularly bt then also dey came out.
Our old blog template was d same...
Thanks for being there..
@ broken star
Thank u soo much..:)
A feminine feel to the template ofcourse..thats all i can say about it. Congrats on getting out collg! :P m still 2yrs away from the big day! liked your poem..i'm a amateur poet myself (http://honeybunchsugarplum.wordpress.com/2010/03/31/restitution/)..thts as far as i could go :P
hey nippu..after a long time ..i am here! what a beautiful post..and wat a cute attempt on poem-writing. but is there anything wrong happened recently that i have missed? its just that your poem reflected so. anyways...the template is beautiful...lover boy..!!
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